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Infectious


Your name's in the papers
you're up to your tricks
It makes me really angry

and makes me real sick

I've tried to stop my love for you
and all the memories you've consumed

But every time I've tried to do

my head is always filled with you...

 

But it's...

No use, no use

I can't control my love for you 

no matter what I try to do

No use, no use

I can't control my love for you 

no matter what I try to do

no matter what I try to do

 

No matter, no matter what I try to do...

No matter, no matter what I try to do...

 

That dirty limousine

is plastered cross the magazines

I wonder where you have been,

and all the people who have seen

 

The shame I feel inside

I really really wanna die

I can't give you an alibi 

then my heart it starts to cry

 

But it's...

No use, no use

I can't control my love for you 

no matter what I try to do

No use, no use

I can't control my love for you 

no matter what I try to do

no matter what I try to do

 

No matter, no matter what I try to do...

No matter, no matter what I try to do...

 

 

 

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Prompt 1: "Is it a Crime?"

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  • couldbeworse
    January 28

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    That dirty limousine

    is plastered cross the magazines

    I wonder where you have been,

    and all the people who have seen

    loved your lyrics! great write!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 15
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    Very good poem here

    This is perfect and has such depth to it good luck in the contest


  • Still Standing gold member
    January 14

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    WOW

    You actually wrote a song a beautiful song at that. I love the rhythm and the repeating of lines it makes it more significant and heartfelt. Thanks for the entry and good luck. No matter what people do we still cant seem to shake the love we have from them and it sounds like this character did something really f'd up. Love itself is a crime!