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[[Its my own teen love story...]]

you and me, people never though of such a thing,
i mean, its just me...but you are you,
your one popular goth boy, with an average normal emo girl like me,
i could of only wished at one point...

a party at your house, i was invited, yes...
i was happy, a huge smile on my face,
you looked at me, a stare that lasted minutes,
you stick out your tongue, i giggled...

yeah, there she is, the girl that's liked you for a while,
she tries to kiss you, you pull away, you hug me instead,
no wounder she hates me...
i smile, feeling sorry for her, but happy you hugged me...

you kiss me without a warning,
people are shocked,
stand in the middle of the room, my back bent a little, you kissing me...
she gets angry, everyone smiled in shock...
and i giggle again...

sending each other text's throughout the night,
ones that make me laugh, blush or smile,
sitting on different sides of the room, staring at each other...
people start to notice it more, all we could do is smile,
it was only a matter of time...

the next day, everyone was in town, i saw you, i smiled,
i ran and hugged you, without a care in the world,
you simple asked "will you be mine...?"
and i answered with a kiss,
everyone was happy...
other than her, she hates me with a passion...

shes got her plans, to brake us up, but she thinks I'm stupid,
i know every plan, i know everything shes thinking,
and shes got not chance...
our love is to strong, for some childish young girl,
she wants my man...
no way, kid...

its me and him forever,
its not an average teenage love story,
its out kind of love,
playful games, giggles and hugs...
simple, but amazing...

<3

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  • Nyphadora
    January 14

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    Sweet!!!!

    I love the fact that it is orignal and not a typical love story. I really like everything about your poem. It was very sweet and I plan to read more of your work. AWESOME hope you and your love are happy!