If only,
I had wings
flying soaring
Brilliant plumage
in boundless blue
Riding the thermals
free from restraint,
all earthly cares
To circle snow capped peaks
Oceanus seething, rolling
foaming far beneath me
Gliding across tree tops
No cages with steel
binding unfurled wings
constricting a spirit
that should be free
If only
Bottom Aries
Author notes
I tried to put the words in a bird shape/form
A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
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Love this one, not only the words but the presentation looks like a flock of Ibis in the dry country. very well done.
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Loved the shape of this and the wonderful imagery you evoke in this poem of flight and freedom.
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haha i love this. fly free! :)
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Thank you for the awesome read! Good Luck in the contest!
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Aries
Thank you for you great comment,I have a love of
birds,& inhereted a White Sulpher Crested Cockatoo (He is 49 years old.)He has a very large aviary to live in.
I tickle him & tell him his 'drum sticks' are nice
& plump!!!!!!!
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You did very well on the shape. Wonderful imagery as well, good luck in our contest, and many thanks for entering.
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Aries
Thank you for your kind remarks.I have a number of
birds (including a 48year old Sulpher Crested
White Cockatoo)I inhereted from my late Family,
he used to swear like a trooper,(my brothers)
He is reformed now !!!!!!!!
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