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Stripped Raw

Reality is setting in
Infiltrating my imaginary land
Darkness fades with blinding lights
My mystery shattered upon reflection
Now plain and simple
I'm just another ordinary Jane
No 'something special'
No unique beauty
Just another average essence
within the heard of sheep in this broken world
No longer in my hidden abode
Stripped raw of surrealism cover

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 14

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    You are anything but an oridnary Jane -

    The look in Dereks eyes when he thinks/sees/talks about you says that