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Journey to the Edge of Time


I go back through an age old life
Shrouded by anger and hunger and strife
Led by a yearning – a desperate soul
Reaching for something – unseen – untold

Rishamian – you did it for me
Challenged my right to set my soul free
Guided me through these waters of pain
Watching me – helping me handle the strain

You followed my path with undaunted faith
Giving me strength to walk in your wake
Showed me the passage I’m fated to walk
With hands so warm you hold as we talk

Now – nightly I walk to the edge of a time
A life that has haunted and shadowed in mine
And I see through the blind as I stand and I gaze
With wonder in silence the depth of the days

Is the clock not just an image of mind
That has bound and distracted the oneness of time
How little it means on the edge that I follow
Of the life that I lead or the space that I borrow

Risha came to me when I was a child
When times were uncertain and thoughts were so wild
The lights from above were so calming and bright
And ushered me on through the veil of night

The soft spoken words echoed loud through the years
Through the days of despair – through the buckets of tears
Through my youth when it seemed that nothing was fair
Through all of these things my Risha was there

Each star in the sky that shines brightly at night
Is a beacon to Risha – my guardian of light
Through the darkness of space and the void that’s so black
I know that my Risha will one day come back

So I will wait with true longing for my friend to return
Though I’ve grown old with years, Risha’s presence still burns
And when that day comes and we’re together again
I’ll walk in the light with my childhood friend

3.11.2002

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 23

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    Oh...another special write here...This is a favorite, my friend...From childhood you reflect on your special chum and kindred spirit...You alone have the rhyming of story telling....You are so gifted... it!


    • condor gold member
      February 23
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      Thank you for reading and commenting. I am so glad you liked this one. It is special to me.


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    January 14

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    Brilliant ! !

    Wow...I really enjoyed your poem As usual your rhyme is spot on. Great job and thanks for sharing


  • doolie gold member
    January 14
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    Another beautiful write my friend. Flows and rhymes so wonderfully.


  • rbruce gold member
    January 14

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                This is a beautiful poem in it's entirety. I see no deed for any edits or changes at all.  Excellent writing and truly beautiful content. Thank you for sharing with us all.

    • condor gold member
      January 14
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      Thanks, Bob. I am so glad you liked this piece, and thank you for the wonderful comments. Oooops. Gotta go. Signing of till friday.

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