Where waters swell and tumble down,
crashing against open beige;
heartache dressed in a shimmering gown.
A gentle laughter, the only sound.
For the setting sun, a cortege,
where waters swell and tumble down.
The dance of twilight- a solar crown,
seducing the horizon in solfege.
Heartache dressed in a shimmering gown.
Leaking WaterTaffy salt,let them drown,
these stolen dreams beneath the waves-
Where waters swell and tumble down.
Gasping currents- tides are the breakdown.
Rippled time across forever's page;
heartache dressed in a shimmering gown.
Ravishing the shore; a breeze wrapped around
this gulf collapse is all I crave.
Where waters swell and tumble down,
heartache dressed in a shimmering gown.
Author notes
Villanelle
Whispered Devotions
A contest entry
- Villanelles by amaranthine lover.
650 points, ended January 30, 2009, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a nicely done piece!

