I stare deep into her through her skull, almost carresing her brain
Trying hard to find her eyes in a mass of my personal uncertainties
At the same time I try half assed to refuse obvious sexual invitations
I feel like stopping her car and yelling that my life is worth more than tonight
Instead I tell her she looks nice, wondering vacantly why I'm still there
Still I ignore what I know is true, hoping behind these thoughts I'm wrong
I lie straightforward with intent, hoping tonight will feel better
"I want you" with a straight wholesome face, not a hint of laughter
Already feeling that familiar inevitable orgasm sickly infesting my body
One nerve at a time, just one at a fucking time
A contest entry
- All of the Above by Flowergirl.
650 points, ended January 16, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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interesting... I like it. it has a nice flow..
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Good.
Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck
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For me, this is prose - as such, it is written well.
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we asked for no erotica.
both of us are 15, and we shouldn't have to read stuff like this in a contest where we asked specifically for no erotica.
you can enter a different poem if you'd like. -
very well ilove it good luck and thank you for the entry.
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