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my song.

here we go
as I fall
in this pit
smashed the wall
broke it down
against your face
I hate this pill
I hate your place
let's slow it down
prove my faith
your lost your will
but I've got grace
So I throw it back
and make it last
until again
you lose your head
and I grow ill
from your nonsense

 

so we're back to one

bruised and shamed

broken down

like a rundown train

circling the past

as vultures follow

they pick at us

they see we're hollow

I shoot them down

a smoky barrel's left

 

the sky darkens

and suddenly there's more

we're surrounded now

no way ashore

I can't do it

can't get us out

So down we go

into the ground

where it's damp and cold

without a sound

And I lie awake

feeling almost free

finally at peace

some silence for me

dou deshita ka?

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