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Self Sacrificed




Spectators spewed several snides,
shackling speech surprisingly!
Shady smiles stretch somber -
sexually suggestive scarlets spread.

Sinners slide swaying softies,
slowly sleeping sicknesses start.
Sucking strawberry stamina sugar,
seeing sticky strengths supporting society.

Suicidal softness succeeds-
sandy seas spray selfish seeds.



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40 words
Prompted by the letter 'S'

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  • MathiasThom
    January 31

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    interesting

    I loved the 2 lines:

    Sucking strawberry stamina sugar,
    seeing sticky strengths supporting society.

    That just conjures up some interesting imagery...

    Nice job on this!


  • Tadd
    January 20
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    fantastic writen