Pendulum swings
Back and Forth
From what I-
Know.
To what you-
Think.
You're so close to figuring out the [Light.]
But you don't know you're still in the
[Dark.]
You just about-
-hit the nail on the head
but I have a plan, for you to
D
R
O
P
the hammer.
I'm creating a new world, and there's only room
for one of us.
Our true colors
from red-
to-
blue.
I'm always a step,
ahead of you.
Author notes
The result of lack of sleep and too much death note.
Written from the perspective from light(kira) to L.
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awesome poem structure and a very enjoyable poem.
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You just about-
-hit the nail on the head
but I have a plan, for you to
D
R
O
P
the hammer.
love this part! -
shinigami!
oh god, when i discovered deathnote i literally couldn't sleep until i had finished it. *twitch* o_0
ryuk's apple withdrawal symptoms make me rofl.
XD
"I'm always a step,
ahead of you. "
brilliantttt!
=D
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I know it was completely amazing!!! The end made me a little sad though, even though light went a little psycho I was still rooting for him.
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i was all for Light and L becoming yaoi friendlies...
o_0
i was more than a little sad at the demise of both...
bawled my eyes out for about a week.
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Ha ya they would make quite the pair, although I knew it had to end sometime
the whole show couldn't be them going back and forth forever, but it would have been funny.
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I've never seen that show before but i really this poem it is very well written.
You just about-
-hit the nail on the head
but I have a plan, for you to
D
R
O
P
the hammer.
Our true colors
from red-
to-
blue.
I'm always a step,
ahead of you.
These two lines i like the most, although the whole poem is really good these two verses stuck out the most to me. Great job, keep writing!
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"L, did you know Shinigami love apples?" sorry I had to quote that after seeing your title
This is really well written, you've got Kira's attitude down. I love the play on his name at "You're so close to figuring out the [Light.]" That was genius. Great job.
And Death Note rules
You definitely deserve these:
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Thank you, I think you're the only one whose commented who has seen the show and would actually understand my play on words. Thanks again, you rock.
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^^ I'm an anime addict, i've seen alot of anime. I even have the Death Note ANother Note the Los Angeles BB Murder Cases.. have you heard of that?
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No, I haven't. What is it?
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It's this novel where Mello's the narrator, and it's the case that in one episode L was talking about how Naomi Misora worked on him on a case. This was that case. It's really interesting, though, you should check it out when you get the chance
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very unique, I really loved the ending
Our true colors
from red-
to-
blue.
I'm always a step,
ahead of you.
Brilliant work , thank you for sharing your time and talents.
I am looking forward to reading more of your work
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wow, i really like this, iv not read anything like it before, i like the style in which you have written it too, it adds to its power within the words, thankyou for shareing.
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