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you're my favorite kind of regret

 

Scattered newspapers and pretty words

make you a picture frame for ill-repute.

Drowning in glass crystals of bargain basement emotions

that more or less make her look like she's trying to

win an Oscar or two.

 

Smear silence like wet soil

on loose lips that spell "m-i-s-t-a-k-e"

on Scrabble boards that can't be erased.

 

It's only safe if you leave here.

Take your lottery tickets and scarlet letters

and give Barbie dolls a new lease on life.

 

With pretty little poison

that flows like H2O,

 

every little syllable you speak

is like death to me.

 

 

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AP Name: Lowercase Prelude

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  • Very interesting piece is all I can really say to you.. Good work thanx for entering

  • You are my second person to make a perfect 100. Thank you for giving me something very interesting and amazing to read. Great work. You've made the finalist list and I wish you the best of luck. Kahy


  • movedon
    February 22
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    again our title is my favorite. and i liked the scrabble part. very lovely.


  • reckless abandon
    January 27

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    "Smear silence like wet soil
    on loose lips that spell "m-i-s-t-a-k-e"
    on Scrabble boards that can't be erased."

    I love this part. thanks for sharing


  • piccola silver member
    January 19

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    the end is gripping. The whole write is good but I really like how you wrapped it up in the end. thank you for the entry

  • Wow....this is cool :]]
    Very nice wording, and clear imagery.

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