lost in thought happily,
lost in time amongst the leaves,
the clock seems to have forgotten me,
for now, I'll remember to forget,
not forgetting to reminisce.
Author notes
Thanks for reading.
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 26. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended January 26, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope you enjoyed....
Comments
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Apart from the slight repetitiveness of "forget", I absolutely adore this piece. 'clock seems to have forgotten me'... 'remember to forget'... some of the lines here are outstanding simply by themselves. Together they form a marvellous piece.
Thank you
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you entered the same contest as i did just to be facetious, didn't you, Nick?
I love you infinitely. *hugs and gives all her good luck so you'll be driving soon*
(Oh btw I love this. Fits the photo marvelously.)
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