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Seeing you and her together
Makes my heart break
Your too good for that
Lieing, cheating slut
I may have 20/20 vision
But i just cant seem to see
What you find in her
That bitch is going to leave you
High and dry
And i refuse to be the one
To pick up the pieces
After she is gone
I told you to stay away from her
But you ignored my advice
Once again
Just like you always do
I am sick of looking after you
You know i would do anything
To see you happy
But i cant take it anymore
This time I wont be there
To fix everything
Once she breaks you

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just a somethin i wrote down no good

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  • Unforgiveable
    January 19
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    i really like, mainly cuz my friend is like this.


  • TearsOnHerCheek
    January 15

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    omg ray this piece is so awsome. ur great at writing. i can really feeel wat u mean. u gotta tell me who its about. sweet write. ttyl


  • Maybe Anastasia
    January 14

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    ahh ray ur getting better! this is good! I can feel it. who is it about? I LOVE the last four lines or so. theyr great