Fighting
Clawing
Pushing out
Causing pain
Feeling no guilt
Desperately fighting
Crying
Screaming
Dying inside
Trying so hard
Pushing back
Ultimately failing
The darkness had risen
Leaving poor light to fall
And she care not
All she knows
Is the feeling
Of moonlight on her skin
And the sand between her toes
And she loves it
Let white cry
Let her fade away
Let her scream and rant and rave
She is free
And she loves it.
But what will become of both
when the separation finally settles
Author notes
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I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me the truth.
Comments
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quick and easy. says alot without talking alot. i especialy like the way that "darkness" takes in the world and enjoys it, not always something that one considers when they think of an evil person(or thing, or whatever).
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A good write that puts the emotions of the dark angel on display. But, separation is not an option, they will be back together one day.
Thanks for entering our contest, and good luck.
Novy & Brazos -
Can't say I like it, but it is well written. I think too straight forward for my liking, like I think you whipped it up quickly and didn't put much thought into this poem. Still I'm sure others will tell you it's great poetry, and maybe it is but I have been reading some great poetry lately so it's hard for me to put this in the same league. Having said all that, nice effect and good luck in the contest.
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