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Reflection

Wreaths in memory of sorrow grew
among the flowers as it flew
the cries reflection's aberration
eyes looking back trepidation.

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  • Nicada silver member
    January 14

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    This is a sad poem and it speaks so much pain and fear in just a few short lines. Very nicely written and a joy to read. Blessings,Patty

    • saddie23
      January 14
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given. I'm glad you liked it. Saddie23