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just a song.

you sit and cry about everything thats been said
be true to me babe
why would you ever want that?
so keep on sitting. wondering.

please because i "i really enjoy that"

i know you hurt
i know it stings
doesn't love bite
isn't love mean?

you cry yourself to sleep
no one really knows the pain...
love will always be there...
i'll meet you on the other side,..

so. SLEEP baby sleep.
if you. can sleep at alll

i'll still love you when your dead
i'll still miss the things you said..

your my friend
but yet the only love i have

come back....COME BACK..
come back to meee..

lock your door
wow your so immature.
call yourfriends weep about it.
weap about it weap about it

you say.
its eating you out!
well turn away turn away!
speaking loud hear me!
i dont want to fight,..

smile wide,, cause
heres your lallaby love you baby love you baby


so. SLEEP baby sleep.
if you. can sleep at alll

i'll still love you when your dead
i'll still miss the things you said..

your my friend
but yet the only love i have

come back....COME BACK..
come back to meee..


please come back.... too meee

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  • Symphony
    April 28
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    Can't believee it has no comments yet

    On the whole, I think that this still needs a little work - it's repetitive in places I don't feel it sits right, but the general idea is good, and this could be very powerful with the right melody.

    thanks for entering