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Life At A Stand Still

Birds sing a blissful song
as time stand still

Remembering promises
made to one another

As we sing
merrily along

A contest entry

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  • Fire Storm
    August 11

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    beautifully sweet

    My dear sweet girl these few words are placed delicately and delightfully well.
    wonderfully penned my dear,,blessings of light,life,laughter and love,,,Firestorm


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 24
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    Wow. I love this. It was short but beautiful. I loved it.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Trill - Trickle
    April 17

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    What a different poem!

    This poem is really good, a good different!

    Great write, keep it up!!!

    Sincerely,

    ~Trill~


  • CanadianGirl1
    January 15
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    Very Lovely!

    Well Done and Best of Luck in the Contest


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 15

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    Music to the ears...what a very soft and uplifting write in brevity...nicely creative with a lovely ending.

    Thank you for sharing!

    mystic


  • crimsondew
    January 14
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    A lovely poem penned here!
    All the best!


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 14

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    I think in the second line "stand" should be "stands" or "stood"

    I like this, it gives a feeling of freedom. Almost as though I could walk away if I wished to


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 13

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    There's nothing like sitting down and listening to a flock of birds in chorus. I love your imagery and thoughts here. Well done and good luck with these 20 words!




    Jeremy0826

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