What is it you want from me?
Have you decided I'm worth something?
Yet you only talk and never listen...
But the only way to ever know me is to hear me
Odd that you haven't gotten that yet...
The red in my eyes isn't from crying...
Haven't you realized this is a lie?
Even when I admit it you don't care
Repeating this to myself isn't going to make me stop loving you
Tomorrow I'll restart this argument
And let myself stop for now
Let you think on what I've said
Kay?
I don't know if you're nodding in aggreement or just to get me to shut up...
Not knowing if you care is the worst
Give it up, you don't know either
Author notes
If you think you understands what I mean while I'm writing this, you're wrong! I have no idea, I just thought of it...so whatever, keep guessing...
Comments
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Very good poem. Short but sweet, the reader comes away with many different idea's on what is going on here which is such a great thing to be able to do; make your writing subjective, you do that very well.
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erm......you no what, i am just as messed up and confused about everything as it seems you are right now. This is a great write...expressing your emotions in a really honest and sinsere way... i think that when you dont under stand what you are saying your self that is when you are the most expressive about your true emotions...well that is just what i think lol. I am here if you need to talk sweetie. i hope you are ok, i feel as shit and messed up as you right now so just remember you are not alone! x
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