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Music

You know the way some
People hear voices
In their heads?

Well in my mind
There is a harmony
It's some epic music
Playing in my brain
It always starts with a beat
And then an amazing bass line
And the guitar starts to play
And it drives you crazy

I don't need no lyrics
For my melody
Just this never ending song

Author notes

HORIBLE I KNOW BUT WHAT EVER

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  • Hsg
    March 10, 2009

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    good

    I think if you truly enjoy the beauty of music then you hear the music in your head and i cant stop listening to music in my head as well.
    good job.


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    January 14, 2009

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    STOP WRITING SO MANY GOOD POEMS.
    ur making me look bad.

    jkjk
    &i second the fact that its not horrible!

    &ur lucky..


  • Simply Olivia
    January 13, 2009

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    Interesting; so you actually hear this music?

    I like this poem best in a metaphorical way.

    Do you play guitar?


    • mickey94
      January 14, 2009
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      ya i actually do hear music in my head and its AWESOME and ya i play acoustic


  • BellaAmare
    January 13, 2009
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    It's not horrible. It's awesome. Good poem.

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