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Entitled Goodbye

I missed the sad goodbye that I've heard
So many lovers wish they never had.

Stolen from my lips,
Death cheated me
Of my carefuly recited speech
One that I'm sure would have cut you to the core.

The desired satisfaction of hurting you back
Has left me...... standing alone,
In a puddle of tears and regret.

Damn death and it's dirty tricks
I want my moment back.

I need to see the look in your wounded eyes
When I tell you a final time...
I'll love you forever
&
I'm sorry too.

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  • Beautiful

    You've made me cry once more, surely a more gorgeous painful poem couldn't been written.

  • SoulWhispher
    January 13

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    This is a most sad write, but remember he has looked into your eyes and knows the love will be there when once more you are united, love John