soft defiled cork
caking the rim of
dripping marrow
a sullied protection
of milked pulp
fibers torn violently
cool glazing
seeps dark
into veins
Author notes
No drugs, just the attempt at an effect that the chemicals would create (in words)... Its ok if it doesn't make sense, kind of a personal deal...
Prompt: bone twists blue 'neath an ocean moon
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #2 by amaranthine lover.
563 points, ended January 28, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Drug/Insane/Messed up Prewrites!!!! by XneverXgoodXenoughX.
1450 points, ended May 19, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
not my typical write, but do you like it?
Comments
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This is pretty sweet. I really like it. Good luck in the contest
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very fantastical loved every last bit of it
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wow. I've always loved reading ur poems, their so different, in a great way mind u ^_^
~Lorissa~



