Threepenny roses
In my hand I clasp
To give you
And when at dusk we meet
In lovers Lane
As we walk under the moon
That shilly smiles
Showing the path we often take
To be alone
Let me adore you
Let me give you,
Threepenny roses
With each kiss
To seal our love.
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A lovely write...as expected.
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This is sweet!
Such a basic action but yet here it conveys such a strong emotion! I love this poem!
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Beautiful write
You are such a wonderful talented writer that makes every poem worthy of many applauds and cheers.
This is so sweet.
Great write my friend.
Take care
Love Peace
campanaro
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So sweet
An endearing poem of a lover's meet,
a kiss and a rose makes the poem complete. Lovely...alby
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what a tender write..your romantic side is showing..hehe...thanx so much for sharing...blessings..namaste..
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I have to agree with all your reviewers hehe. I leave you with 3 penny roses for your lovely thoughts.
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Love it, Love it!
This is gorgeous, Nick! Is that a touch of British I detect there?
This is filled with lovely visuals and a dreamy, romantic walk down a moonlit path. I can imagine every female reader wishing it were written for them. After all, how many men wax romantic and poetic in the same breath? Far too few, so you must fulfill all reader's dreams.
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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You sound like a hopeless romantic that knows how to create memories, this is beautiful. Blessings.
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Wonderful write down memory lane
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how wonderful loads of memories
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