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Plunge ( # 2 )




Diving deep into the cool sweet waters of Oasis
Savior of an arid soul in need of their other half
Immersing self in the love sought for an eternity
Drifting into a crispness of slumbering  gentleness
Saved from a hellish heat of loneliness and sorrow
Walk along side until the dryness of death encircles
Come Oasis the savior of all that exists on all plains

 

 

 



 

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2... plunge

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 16

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    What a wonderful use of the word "plunge"
    You have vividly expressed it so well in a unique and beautiful way...Ty for entering!

    Lynda


  • DogFish silver member
    January 13

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    I thought I might like to reserve this word when I saw this contest...But I'm just as happy to have read your poem!