i.
Our love--
people become jealous,
there's nothing more pure.
Two souls joined,
perfectly connected,
puzzle pieces fitting together
ii.
Our life--
it's been fun for so long,
we need each other.
We need each other,
as much as plants water,
and animals air.
iii.
Reality--
this can't last,
not when she's yours too.
I was the "other girl"
while she was away,
the one you used
as a sex-only partner
[a whore if you will]
Author notes
Well I was right.. This hurt, but I changed my original plan. Hope you like it anyway 
Oh! Option I used...
b ) It's an affair, and in a few months, the spouse returns
-or, your significant other and you are away together somewhere, and in a few months, you return home, one of you to a spouse who is waiting.
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Comments
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i love how down to earth this is with the emotion and style you used, i also love the style of using brackets at the end i do that sometimes and i feel you do a great job with it overall
thanks for entering
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