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When One Is Both

 

Words written

turned into

words read.

 

 

Friendships started

become

friendships kept.

 

 

Laughter shared

is

laughter remembered.

 

 

Respect given

was

respect earned

 

 

Hearts opened

now

hearts joined.

 

 

Loves hope

forever

loves joy.

 

 

 

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for "Him" as always

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 18

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    Simple truths
    speak with impact.

    And your creative piece
    placed here has impact, indeed!

    Aesthete2000


    • freespirit51
      January 18
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      Aesthete2000

      Thanks for you kind words. My muze got away from me again.


  • Flowergirl
    January 17

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    brilliant i love it and i love the background too i t is pretty keep up the great work i love your format on this piece ikeep it up.

    • freespirit51
      January 18
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      Flowergirl

      Thanks for your kind and wonderful words. Hope you enjoyed. My muze took over and I always lewt her have her way.

  • Thor-201
    January 17
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    lucky Him! A lovely poem here.


  • kyralinn
    January 17
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    This is one of those poems that makes you think. It's simple yet beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

  • this is pretty

    Him should feel blessed that you have written such sweet and meaningful words for Him.


    • freespirit51
      January 18
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      GypsyfromOrleans

      Thanks for your kind words. Hoipe you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

  • SweetWondersGirl
    January 16
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    Wonderfully written!!! Keep it up!


    • freespirit51
      January 18
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      SweetWondersGirl

      Thanks so much for your kind words. Thanks for reading and commenting


  • arafura gold member
    January 14
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    Lovely.

  • PureCountry
    January 13

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    Little Wind,

    I find much here that is pleasing to the spirit. Your words carry great meaning, though simplistic in form.

    Loves hope
    forever
    Loves joy.

    I wish I had the words to speak to here of how this has resounded deeply within. I can only say, I needed to read this tonight.

    Niaish for sharing with us all.

    Silent Hawk

    • freespirit51
      January 14
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      Silent Hawk

      Thanks for you kind words. These words have been rolling around in my head for days and it took time for them to gell enough for it to make a little sense to me. Glad you enjoyed.

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