flying virgin angel, always realistically pure
persistent divergent voice nagging, a dark lure
a revolutionary journey, she was about to embark
engagement with one's self, light verses dark
full moon glimmering upon the ocean shores
darkness invokes, ivory angel opens her doors
saturated angel forgotten, with swallowing surges
sinister angel dressed in disguise, promptly emerges
savoring her crisp freedom, no longer confined
leaving defeated pure white angel tragically behind
triumphing achromatic black, such a beautiful delight
liberal, sexy black beauty ambitiously begins her flight
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A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think, let me know ... Thank you!
Comments
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Thank you for you comment, and yes the twins indeed do split, kind of like me in real life, mostly good, but sometimes, just sometimes, the bad girl gets to come out!
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Aha, the twins split, and the dark one gets to ride for a while.
Good take on the pic, and your poem rhymed and flowed very well. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos -
Thank you for your kind comment, I enjoyed writing about the pic.
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Wow. Very good
"full moon glimmering upon the ocean shores
darkness invokes, ivory angel opens her doors"
I love these lines.
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