The last of it.
I was ready for the end,
I’d waited long enough,
I’ve tried it before,
But someone always “saved” me,
If that’s what you can call it,
Seeing how life is far worse then death.
People listened,
At least a few,
But the one person I needed to hear me,
Wouldn’t listen at all,
I begged for him to hear me,
But he just turned away,
So I told him what I was going to do.
Told myself if he told me not to then I wouldn’t
And he didn’t even care,
Never once told me that it wasn’t a good idea,
Not worth it,
People I barely knew told me they needed me to be here,
But not him,
Not the one person I needed,
Now its not worth it anymore,
Its all over and doesn’t really matter,
Come the day and I’ll be gone,
You’ll get over it,
They all do,
Nothing much to miss beside a being to listen,
Never talking,
Never moving.
It doesn’t really matter anymore,
So this is the last of it.
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Amazing! Really good write!! i love itttttttttt
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thank you!!!!
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Shawn...
Shawn,
I liked this because..... I can relate he doesn't even know i exist but he's a friend ( a bad one) but I'm sure he'll come around to me. I hope this Nick notices you I really really hope he does the pain and sorrow don't go away I've been through this........ I'm going through it right now. I hope this nick comes around too, if he doesn't I could always chew his a*s*s out on how he should.
I'm here if you need me. message or e-mail me if you want to talk.
Your Friend,
Deathwolf Ichigo
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yeah, we use to date, but it went south a while ago and now he cant even talk to me without getting mad at me, even thoug he says he's not mad... he is.
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hey
hey great job. jeep up the good work
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omg!!! shes so cute!!!! ah!!!! I totally wanna snuggle her lol
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I loved this,shawn...but why is your display pic a mouse lookin thingy?!
o.o
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cause I have no idea how to change it haha and my friend changed it to this lol
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... LIER!!
LIER!! you said you couldn't write
this is better then any of my poems
plez don't give up
and you can talk to e when ever -
not good writer my azz lol =] keep fighten shawn
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Hey,
that was a good write saun. I liked it. it hits hard for being written sort of.....simply?? idk. it was amazing and I'm sorry you hate to write.
loves!!! Emm-
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Amazing
Y HELLO THERE
GREAT WRITE, LOVED IT MUCHES
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Beautifully written mate...glad that you decided that to end it all because...you are gold. Whether you believe that or not.
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thanks hun
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Sorrow hits like a ton of bricks in this piece.
Pain is anything but fleeting. I like how it has a certain cadence to it. The rhythm is short, and not at all steady, but the tempo keeps it going.
I like it.
Write more.
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yeah I hate writing......
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This is great, am just sad to hear you're still suffering.
But this piece really deserves round of applause.
Nela
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You can feel the sadness and hurt from this... i like it it's really good.
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your a good writer and dont say anything difrent serousely...
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This is a very good write, touching, and tells of pain and heartache, I feel the same way sometimes...Even though he may sleep next to me, the saddness is still there, like he never even notices me. Sometimes it isnt always perfect to get what you want... I hope you find your answer soon...
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This is really good and I do understand your pain, I can connect with this very well. I don't know the whole story but don't let it get you down to much one day he will realise you are a good person.
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wow
great job man i agree with ur last comment your a very good person to be with i have talked to you for a couple of day and i no that u r my best frined i love talking to you when i get home from work ur on and i am happy so life will always get better it will never get any worst trust me i hve been there -
Shawn...
It does effing matter.
And if this is nickk....your talking about.
I will fucking bitch him out.
Seriously, your such a wonderful person, and I know what your feeling...I really do.
But, things get better.
There so bad right now, they cant get any worse.
Chin up.
Im here if you need me..
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