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The Day I Fucked My ........

I saw her panties dropping...
There was no room for stopping.

I watched her juices flowing.
Her golden mound was glowing.

In a cosy bed she tucked me.
She rubbed me and she sucked me.

Then I returned the favor.
She had a tasty flavor.

She pleaded, "Baby, tease me!
Chew out my clit, and please me!"

My tongue tip lashed her thighs...
I still recall her cries.


I WAS THE HAPPIEST CREATURE
THE DAY I FUCKED MY TEACHER.

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  • John Faulkner gold member
    November 15
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    I have now become your math teacher.I gave you an ..A.. on yoyr last exam..How will you thank me.?..lol


  • awannabepoet
    September 15

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    Who knew, there was this thing about teachers from the girls too?

    LOL

    Gosh I never thought of that angle for the female teachers.. oh lordy, lordy!


  • OMG i absolutly love the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE ALWAYS IMAGINES FUCKIN MY TEACHERS AND that may seem crazy but its so kinky i love it.....the last two lines made me want to screamm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Hot and Horny

    I always excelled in all of my classes, and stayed one step ahead of all my teachers! I would show her a few things to keep her in class after the bell rings, and she would be keeping me after school for being such a bad boy!

    A beautifully written poem! I think I even drooled a little over this one! I absolutely loved the last stanza.. Fucking flawless!!

  • WOW

    this just put me in the mood for some good loving!! great passionate poem


  • VirginPoet
    March 28
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    I liked it and the last two lines made me read the poem again.


  • Beret55 silver member
    March 27
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    mmmmmmmmmmm a very good write.. tasty.

  • that was awesome! hehehe very cheeky and naughty and erotic. hope she taught u a lesson


    • Galaxy2
      March 14
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      PrinCeSsOfRoCk

      Yes, she did. And I'm good enough now to teach a lesson to others. Want to be tutored, baby?


  • Galaxy2
    February 25
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    Naughtygrlred

    Of course, I was.


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 25
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    hahaahhahaha...i get u were.


  • Eamon
    February 18
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    I bet your teachers Pet now...... x

    <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
    She pleaded, "Baby, tease me!
    Chew out my clit, and please me!"
    My tongue tip lashed her thighs...
    I still recall her cries.
    I WAS THE HAPPIEST CREATURE
    THE DAY I FUCKED MY TEACHER.
    <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
    Can I offer you lessons at my private Night School.
    Smoooooooooooooooth & Sexy Write

    Eamon... x

    • Galaxy2
      February 19
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      Eamon

      Shall I feel proud of myself for being my teacher's pet?

      I didn't mind getting lessons from you were you a lady teacher. Thanks for the offer.


  • Mystery
    February 17
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    Oh baby

    Come teach me a lesson


    • Galaxy2
      March 14
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      KayKay13

      When and where do you want to have your first lesson, honey?


    • Galaxy2
      February 17
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      arcanum

      I'd prefer to be taught. Wanna be my teacher, honey?


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 17

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    Wow lol. Wasn't expecting it to end like that. Seems like you could make this story go on forever and it'd never get boring. VERY Hot write!!


    • Galaxy2
      February 17
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      Beautiful-N-

      I hope you will expect a lot if you become my teacher

  • Eamon
    February 9

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    BEAUTIFUL WORDS

    A Great write by a beautiful young woman, If only I was a girl for a day I would let you go all the way and some...
    Eamon.


  • Nicotine Eyes
    February 6
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    lol, good one


    • Galaxy2
      February 17
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      Nicotine Eyes

      Who?
      the poem, my teacher, or me?


  • Deathless1
    February 5
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    how fun!
    love the rhyme and the flow.
    and fucking teachers is always great, at least the hot ones.


    • Galaxy2
      February 5
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      Deathless 1

      Your experience proves mine to be right. Good for us!


  • The Drifter
    February 1
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    Very well written.

  • liltxgirl
    January 23
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    lol nice i like that one. I think that is a fantasy of alot of girls and guys so very well said.


    • Galaxy2
      February 5
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      litxgirl

      Has your fantasy been realized, sweety?


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    January 22

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    hehe NICE!
    i enjoyed reading this

    Congrats on the Honourable Mention.. Keep on writing,

    Nooni


    • Galaxy2
      February 5
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      NooNiThEWitch

      Thanks for the sweet advice; I'd keep on writing and keep on f...... my .......


  • Slinky-milinky
    January 20
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    ha great twist at the end, student teacher relations are so saucy!


    • Galaxy2
      February 5
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      Slinky-milinky

      How about watching us together...can be arranged....


      • Slinky-milinky
        February 5
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        lols, you make the DVD and i will cum...*cough* i mean come...


        • Galaxy2
          February 5
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          Silinky-milinky

          Don't worry, honey!
          Your cum will be properly taken care of....


  • fallenAngel86
    January 20
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    awesome write can't wait to read your next write,, you are a very talented writer an i love reading your poems


    • Galaxy2
      January 25
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      FallenAngel86

      I'm a taleted flirt as well...wanna try, honey?


  • Desire gold member
    January 18

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    Wow~

    Oh My Word Girly~ You sure brought heat with Your words and images to singe the screen also the eyelids
    Oy!!!!
    You take the reader there and light the monitor up
    HOT!!! Excellent this is and Heck~
    I imagine Your teacher was quite Happy
    walked around with endless smile

    Fan on ultimate high~ Yep!! Yep!!
    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Heat~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

    • Galaxy2
      January 25
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      Desire

      Yes, she was completely satisfied with my perfornce, and wished that I perform thus repetedly.

      Thanks a lot for your articially enticing comment. You deserve to be my teacher too.

      Hugs and kisses plus some wild fantasies!

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    January 17
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    very hot, a good fantasy for me.. to bad i didnt have any hot teachers when i was in school.


    • Galaxy2
      January 25
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      SurrenderMyHeart

      But you can have some hot students now. Can I volunteer myself as one? I'm quite experiencd, honey!


    • Ms Lez
      January 18
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      Galaxy2 / SurrenderMyHeart

      Wish I were your teacher!


  • nonsexynerd
    January 15
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    OMG.

    i liked that. Less detail than u usually put in yours but i liked it.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    January 14
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    OMG!!!!! I didn't know you had it in you girlie!!! How exciting!!


    • Galaxy2
      January 17
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      cre8tiv-writer

      Hi, sexy beloved! Now you know it so let's do it together.


  • MorbidGarden
    January 14
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    a surprise ending, indeed...could use a little more detail, in my opinion, but good other wise...

    • Galaxy2
      January 17
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      Nowhere is Here

      Details about my lustful teacher might cause her embarassment. But I can tell you the details in privacy with her permission.


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    January 13

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    Nice! I loved the ending. Super write, thank you so much for sharing. Great rhyming. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


    • Galaxy2
      January 13
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      WillAlwaysLove

      Welcome, honey!
      I love to ENTER.


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    January 13
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    blunt and right to the point, these always make me smile.


    • Galaxy2
      January 13
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      JustAnotherIdiot

      I like to kiss the smiling lips...

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