I’m flying up above
in my little astral plane
don’t bother waking me
by calling out my name
cause I’m dreaming
about oceans of cream
and tuna, galore
unlike what I’ve ever seen!
and I’m just gonna dream some more
oh, and, don’t mind my snore…
Author notes
10 lines. Kinda corny, but I think it's kinda cute as well. Enjoy!
A contest entry
- Computer Crash Funny Contest by Riftkin.
575 points, ended January 25, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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What a cute little write. It feels dream like in quality, so that helps drive the purpose of the poem.
I will have to check out the picture that this goes with.
This goes to show that you can make something vibrant with only ten lines. Nice write.
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great take on the picture prompt with your poem.
thank you for entering my contest.
best of luck to you.
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aww, this is so pretty...why don't you write more? you're never here...
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Wonderful, I love it. Isn't that the cutest picture?
This was just as cute and very well done. My best wishes.
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