you broke my shning moon,
like you shattered my heart,
leaving them in piece,
not careing what you've done,
or
how you have
you move on not a care
in the world,
hurting everyone you touch,
but the one you've hurt
the most is..
me and my moon..
love sucks never love again unless you have to
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lovely portray of a broken heart
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this is a good poem...one i feel i can relate to
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This poem looms of sadness...It is so tragic when love ends in heartbreak...you wrote your hurt out in this piece...
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Sad
that happens with others, as they walk across our hearts, as if it was a lawn, not really caring where they step. I could feel yopur anguish. Hope things become better soon. f
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Heartfelt
your words remind me of my own heart breaks.
weird how love strikes again despite our objections.thank you for writing and posting
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very sad
this is very sad
but is very heartfelt
good one
you spelled shining in the first line wrong and caring in the forth line wrong, and i think you meant to spell the word piece in line three plurally as pieces ... just thought i'd point those out to you
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