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Alleluia

I owe You so much, Lord,
more than I could ever give

if I lived a thousand years
serving You with joy
it wouldn't be enough
to be worthy of Your love

Alleluia
is all I can say
I will never be able
to fully comprehend
what it means
that You died at the cross for me

Lord, your unconditional love
never ceases to amaze me

Author notes

13 January 2009

I watched this video and I couldn't stop crying... I may never be able to fully comprehend what He had to go through so we can live... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NEZFSeX_0fY

and after just sitting here and crying, I started writing this...

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  • Howard Manser gold member
    August 22, 2009
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    A Very Meaningful Message!


  • Jburrus
    March 26, 2009
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    Good Work

    I eally liked this poem. Thanks for entering.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    March 1, 2009

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    HalleluYAH!

    Yes, when we even try to imagine the depth of His love for us it should bring on tears. Thanks for spilling out the way you feel for the gift of Salvation. None of us could ever be worthy of the sacrifice of His life. Awe of Him is the beginning of understanding!


  • oceanbluize
    February 6, 2009

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    A compelling, and deeply devout write poetess. I commend your strength and your faith in our savior. Everyday Jesus annoints your head child. And his love and mercy are boundless. Thank you for sharing your heart and joy with me.

    May the lord bless thee and keep thee, may the lord make his face shine upon you, and be gracious unto to you, and may he lift up your heart, and give you peace...Amen

    Ocean


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 14, 2009

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    Bravo! I have to agree. The miracle of His love can sure take some getting used to!
    Thank you for sharing such a fine piece.
    Gaylene

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