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Love Hurt Deep... Like Arrows

Love
squeaked past pumpkin pie

Hurt,
slippery deviations poked holes

Deep
wounds brushed chaffed lips

Like
seeds, souls cried out

Arrows
sought an innocent heart


Piercing dreams...
forever

and

ever











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Prompt: Picture Prompt

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  • Sunshine Always
    January 17, 2009
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    Excellent and congratulations on the Gold...well deserved...mal


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 14, 2009

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    Beautifully written and great use of the 30 word limit.
    This was so wonderfully done, I love how you have it set up.
    Thank you for entering.

    Riftkin


  • Angelflower
    January 13, 2009
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    a wonderful write for such a picture..