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Relapse

I am relapsing
Into the old me,
My old life,
But this time
I'm different.

I'm working all the time again,
But I'm making time for friends.

I'm crazy about someone,
But I won't run away this time.

I'm losing weight,
Changing clothes,
Cutting my hair,
Wearing jewelry.

I'm doing it for me
And I'm doing it for you.
I'm relapsing,
But I'm doing it differently.

I'm doing it better
And I'm doing it without you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • infernalxfidelity
    January 15

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    humm...relapsing for the better? interesting concept. i like it.
    you always write such great poems.
    <3


  • PhadraigMcShane
    January 14

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    You don't need to lose weight.

    You're too skinny.

    Go eat a croissant.

    (And p.s. I like your poem.)

    Lol


  • BAMFNx3
    January 13

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    This was powerful Sonya, I loved it. I'm so so so proud of you. From what I just read it sounds like you're doing excellent and I couldn't be happier for you. =]