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Coming to Grips (Tanaga)

Gently kissing his cool lips.
Oh cruel is the stroke of death!
Living hard for that last breath,
More complex to come to grips!

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  • second-born
    January 16
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    very powerful...for the emotion is well-expressed...thank you for sharing this!!!


  • Amera gold member
    January 13

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    Oooo this is great! I have never tried to write Tanaga before. You made this short verse meaningful and flowing. I really should try this because I speak a little Tagalog. Great work!

    Love,
    Amera♥