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Seasons (Tanaga)

Death of a rose shatters spring.
Rainbow leaves scatter and fall.
Snow top tree a leaf does cling.
Warm sun raises the rose tall.

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  • trekkergirls bank
    June 9

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    nicely written. Tanagas are very hard to write I think and you have my respect for being able to write them. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • mcheadle
    January 17
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    A beautiful job

    I love roses...mac


  • second-born
    January 16

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    a very challenging piece..for you've described the four seasons in this short poetic form..and I think you did a good job..thank you for sharing this poem!