Hunger
The lone sentinel stands, watchful
He sees the child, warm and young
She is youthful, and new to this world
He hungers for her, to feed on innocence
He watches her from afar, waiting
Her youth ripens, her body changes
He stands at the window, listening
The child sleeps, dreaming ever
The child notices him, strangely familiar
His eyes meet hers, and he turns away
He walks down an empty alleyway
The young girl follows, turning the corner
She meets him, hidden in an alcove
He opens his arms, and embraces her
Their lips meet, and she tastes his breath
He savors her sweetness, her youth
He pushes her away, leaving the alley
She stares after him confused, certain
They meet twice more, his retreats continued
She knows his name, but cares not
The child knows who she courts, and what
She knows his hunger, and her place in it
He longs for her, she knows well
She decides, willing herself to him
He looks with hunger, but denies her
She is hurt, unsure what has passed
He glances at her, and leaves
He denies his hunger for the first time
He stalks his prey, crouching amongst the trees
The doe feels his teeth, a flash of pain
He feeds on her body, lusting for more
He wipes his mouth, and moves on.
Memories
The child remembers him
She recalls his face
She sees him in her dreams
Smells him in that place
After dark she seeks the shadows
Longing for the night
Dark out on the banister,
A cat takes ghostly flight
She runs to lift the window
Sure that its him at last
The window slides, and through the screen
She feels the icy blast
Alas, something has gone amiss
Shadows creep into the room
“What!?”- she asks
Is this?
Phoenix
She slinks in o’er the pane
Cape catching on the sill
She rips it back into place
The child sits cold, and still
The Phoenix’s eyes glaze over,
And she feels the pain
She breaths in the child’s youth
And savors in her gain
The child’s feet upon the stairs
A crash, and then a sigh
A look into the Phoenix’s eyes
A whimper, then good-bye
A Change
Somewhere in the night
A lone figure doth he stir
His breath catches as he stops
And then remembers her
His mind changes as he flies
Soaring through the air
This he does, it is not right
Alas, he does not care
He sends birds fleeing
Screeching to the night
Just once more in her embrace
And then he’ll be alright
End
After many months does he
Come unto the place
The spot where he has dream’t
Of her warm embrace
Her room is empty
And in its place instead
Is a mother, weeping softly
Crouching, and full of dread
His eyes do flick to her
Sorrow for her fear
“Where” he asks “is the child”
“Why is she not here?”
Sobbing once more, the mother points
And off into the night
Until his feet come to a halt
His reason all but right
At his feet is where she lies
An epitaph which he read
It seems he came far too late
For his love is dead
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Comments
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Indeed a master piece, you have penned a brilliant poem and quite the fascinating story you do tell.


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a very good love tragedy an interesting write emotions stir when i read this a well written peace the flow is nice a sadly written peace full of love and hurt
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I love a good tragedy
A masterpiece indeed this is, fyre. It stirs so many emotions that it goes well beyond what I am used to reading. This makes most stuff on this site seem monochrome. It managed to evoke terror, happiness, the satisfaction of the forbidden, the shame of the forbidden, the longing for the feeling one thinks is so right, and then the culmination when suddenly, it is known to be wrong. This brought a lot of memories from things I had been through up (emotional memories) and It hooked me with the ebb and flow of the work in it's entirety. Great write! This was my unadulterated pleasure to read.

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Indeed this is your masterpiece, the first to prove you are entirely capable of professional writing. It is lovely. .. it is-- what more than that can I possibly say. A wonderful piece my friend, I greatly enjoyed reading it.






