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Failure

I’m a failure in your eyes
Always will I be
Never will you see the good
That grows inside of me

If I climbed a mountain
And half way did I fall
Through my tears and pain
You would ask if that was all.

Many challenges have I faced
And yea I’ve conquered all
But now I break and slipped a pace
This day did I fall.

As I look up from my knees
In need of your support
In your face there is none
Because all you see is failure.

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  • LaVieBohemme
    January 13

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    This is really good! nice job, it really shows the pain you feel. Hope all is well!!!
    Jen