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The Gift of the Rocks

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Her carved, painted rocks, risen to the sky,
They have to be the work of our Mistress.
We take what she gave us, not knowing why,
that our souls with such beauty She did bless.

Look! Did you see? I thought I saw it move...
Perhaps Her hand slid by, changed a feature.
Mystery is there, behold and behoove,
Bestowed on man, that unworthy creature.

Even when left, the memory lingers,
to be carried forever in our rhymes.
Gilded with love, a gift from her fingers,
to uplift our souls and pleasure our minds.

What She has written, let man leave alone,
Her beauty to see, our souls to atone.

Author notes

The hand of God, evidenced in a canyon. Image uncredited.

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  • Rheea gold member
    January 25
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    God is not a girl , he just can not be!!! I only get along with men . you make me smile.


  • smonte19124 gold member
    January 18

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    I loved everything about this fantastic write and I thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • ennovy silver member
    January 14

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    Her hand carved talent speaks for its-self for no man can create as she does...nature always grabs me in awe...and you captured the essence of rocks and there unique forms....this is an inspirational read of piety....renewing appreciation for life....excellent poem my dear...........Novy


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