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clouds race across sky

clouds race across sky
wobbling wildly in chilled wind
red robins retreat

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 17
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    Love how you got alliteration into this Haiku. Wonderful.


  • thejollytinker
    January 16
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    The very spirit of haiku in every sense- and beautiful. Thank you! G


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    January 13

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    Well placed Alliteration found in this abbreviated work. Write on!

    Dennis