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I Remember Me!

I remember all of my life like yesterdays dream,
I remember my life with everyone who’s in it we built a team,
I remember watching titanic making my eyes water and beam,
I remember a forgotten love song i still feel,
I remember lower school whishing i was someone else,
I remember middle school i wanted to be me strong and real,
I remember my old house as if i lived in it today,
I remember my nana we used to always make sure she’s ok,
I remember reading the past and looking forward to the future,
I remember my big sisters 14th birthday last September,
And my life is so interesting to me,
So I remember.

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  • Nicole Hanna
    January 16
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    Thanks for entering, but not what I'm looking for at this time.

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 14

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    That is lovely

    I like how you obviously care very deeply about the people and events in your life. It means you value the time you get in whatever way you can. Loved the write and thanks for entering the contest.


  • Tqop
    January 13

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    Very beautiful. I love your unique writing style. It means so much to me to read such lovely poetry.