Wandering, seeking connections
never feeling winters blow.
Heart no longer beating rapid; since
essence of life cease to flow.
Haunting spirits hasten to return.
Shattered death; venom burned.
Beyond loves fountain of repair
desires grow without alibi’s.
Sweetly moaning his name; each
evening seeking her prize.
(chanting words of despair)
“Come back my darling lover
from dynamic heaven above.
Never more shall thee roam
purgatory ‘tis so alone.”
Ah! The tale told of true love
precious as any rhythmic heart.
Sung in silence; dark, bland
how destiny ripped, tore apart.
Earth’s moon spirits entwined
magical music calls them still.
Until infinity snatches love home
both waltz o’er natures fields.
Author notes
This is about two spirits in love seeking each other in the afterlife...
In a list
Do You see the picture of spirits when reading?
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"Wandering, seeking connections
never feeling winters blow.
Heart no longer beating rapid; since
essence of life cease to flow.
Haunting spirits hasten to return.
Shattered death; venom burned.
Beyond loves fountain of repair
desires grow without alibi’s.
Sweetly moaning his name; each
evening seeking her prize."
I liked these stanzas. This is an amazing right. I really enjoyed reading it. Very deep. Vivid and raw emotion was held in this poem. Very well done. And thank you for sharing this with us. -
very nice, a lot of expression here and the mood comes through, a dark idea, spirits locked in place... really well done...PK
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Beautiful piece. I love the imagery and the image above the piece! Keep up the great work and thanks os much for the wonderful share! Best wishes to you.
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Beautifully done. The visualization is stunning and I loved your word choices....infinity, entwined, dynamic heaven.....ahhhhh so very sweet and tender! Loved it!
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excellent write
enkoyed this one very much bravo
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This is so hauntingly beautiful
with very powerful imagery-
as such you made it easy for me
to visualize and to lose
myself in your words.
Awesome
~Pastel
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This is so gripping and sad of the spirits needing to find each other again... vivid imagery. Blessings.
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This reminds me of an ancient fable of two lovers separated and forced to wander in search of each other even after death, the winds of the West and the East never to become one again. It's so sad and so compelling and you did such a magnificent job in capturing the essence of the picture.
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Beautiful write here, very haunting and an enjoyable read. The imagery is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
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both waltz o’er natures fields.
Only one grammatical error here... natures should be nature's in order to show possession. other than that... this is a wonderful show of metaphors and the wording is such that it makes a person think. Best kind of poetry... keep it up.
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Yes, two spirits, but alas, they seem very far apart. It would appear that if there are boundaries in heaven, they will have to cross them to get to each other, much the same as mortal life...
Bittersweet, haunting, makes one hope for a happy ending. Your imagery is superb, as usual, Dove. A very good write.
I love you,
Brazos
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oh wow
thanks for the author's notes because i thought i was wrong thinking u were speaking of 'ghosts' but i guess i 'got it' all along!!
this was a hauntingly beautiful write..
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