outon, slough den, burn the burden bulb
landen sireghin, out of townien
maker mistaken, crisisten audence
too many tears
out in the open
glug lullabyed mouth, had truely spoken
much to have feel-in, a fire
close all withdrawl, smoky eyes desires
turn off all the light tonight
kiss in the dark,
joan of, noah's
ark
even the nightlight, walken out of saloon doors,
no question,
ouchy cactus, butten, tongue spitten, verbally goin
slettin the gates open,
smoothly in a circular darlection, this is
preservation, no artificial flowers will hang from our teeth,
we're not horse of family, we are natures academies
herin, forthell, livid like :
kiss and tell,
giss your lips, we'll kiss but keep it se-cret
GIVE ME YOUR TREASONS
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This is cute and creative. I saw in your profile your from Great Brittan- that would explain why I don't understand some of the words, but all added such depth to your poem. I like the singsong nature and flow.
Pure dilight to read.
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suezzie
love your name - the e of it
i don't think most english people understand though aswell - thankyou for reading.... it's nice to know someone likes
it's a karaoke singa-pour in the deep watering songing
hope you're well... have a smashing week! xxx
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thanking you a'plenty
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I can't help but feel there is a "hidden" message here...as though the poem should be read in a different way to find that message. This seems very creative and I would love to know more about it. Please IM me!
Raymond
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i do believe in there's always another side/way on a matter - thankyou muchas for reading... this is my secon' attem' to reply back to you propella-y, bad internet jaggering.
i'm glad of the feeling you received after reading this... i think the language of it off tracks from subject, or sense. I'll ramble to you in an IM soon, watch out. Hope you've had a great day,
cheri cheri
leanne
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