He plays games.
He claims me,
But he doesn't love me?
My mind doesn't know what to think.
No matter what I do,
He's always a part of my heart.
He tugs at the poor little thing,
As soon as the wound is almost...
Healed.
He opens it and lets it bleed.
Does he do it on purpose?
Would he even care?
(Breaking...)
Tell me how I could make it better.
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OMG...wow...I connecte very deeply with this as I am experiencing the EXACT same feelings again. Very nicely done and a clever use of your words to connect with your audience
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I don't know, everything looks to be spelled right, the spacing gives it more depth, altogether looks great. nice job
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Thank you very much ^_^
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