shake, rattle and roll
go ahead, pay the toll,
a simple stroll,
into friendship cove.
an ear and a hug
when times are rough-
all wrapped up with a bow
just for you
to let you know
no matter what
no matter where you go
I'll stand strong
by your side
till the end of time.
A contest entry
- AP Family by A-muse-in-writer.
700 points, ended January 26, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh I reread it
Wow I see what you mean I took it a different way the first time . -
Indeed we shall
To keep the chain of love solid and true this is a great write here
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Thanks Patty... I'm not too sure about this one, but that is ok too
It does send a good message
Which I think is the important thing.
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You Are Wonderful
Oh I just love you and what a wonderful poem. You are great and I know he will be honored to have you be a part of his family....
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie 
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Aww
This is so beautiful in it's simplistic message of such open kindness and good will. Love it.
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Oooooooooooooooh~
Oh My~ Linky me when You are done Beautiful
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