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Intervention

Stale tears settle on broken surfaces.
Herione, alcohol, pain killers;
Just another addiction to submurge family bonds.
Children lose parents.
Sisters lose brothers.
Husbands lose wives.                   
And family ties disapate.
Hearts ache,
In hopes of a mircle, some form of a cure.
The sickly defiantly ignore the pleas.
Rock bottom is all they know.
Its easier to exist.

Author notes

This was inspired from the show Intervention. If you havent seen it, I recommend it. Its a very powerful show. I cry every episode.

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  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    January 20, 2009

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    addiction is a ravenous beast that is never satisfied..
    until everything is gone
    you described it really well.
    great job!
    keep up the good work!


  • Candy Morphine
    January 13, 2009

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    Just another addiction to submurge family bonds.
    -So true. what a terrible cycle.

    i love the second last line the most though. it's so hopeless and seems to have lost any struggle.