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Time to kill

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I have a little time to kill

So stay a while if you will

Watch me lure him with desire

My vengeful mind is set on fire

Whilst he’s thinking with his cock

I’ll spike his drink, oh what a shock

He doesn’t quite know left from right

Oh how much fun I’ll have tonight

 

 As I lead him to the bed

His eyes are rolling in his head

This playful puppy is all mine

I tie him down and feel divine

Sweet revenge is mine to take

As gleefully I start to take

My instruments each one with care

Hummm … We’ll have to wax that pubic hair

 

 Swiftly tie a gag in place

Such stupid expression upon his face

A mixture between confusion and panic

But its terror I see when my blades on his dick

Little cuts along the way

“Oh yes that’s right its time to pay”

Not such a big boy now I see

Recognition maybe? Do you remember me?

 

 Do you feel regret with each slice I make?

Each piece of you I slowly take?

Amazing what you can live through

You never believed, but now you do

The blood is flowing fast and free

Such delight it is to see

And you still cry and beg and plead

You’re simply paying for your deed

 

 But alas my work is through

Just one more thing to do for you

Those are nasty wounds

Infection could set in

I’ll wash you off with this bottle of gin

Grab my bag, my coat, my work is done

Take a cigarette and offer you one

Light up as I take the door off the latch

 

                Watch your expression change

 

                                                               As I throw you the match…. 

Author notes

An old one that i kinda like

art by: http://luncatic.deviantart.com/art/A-Time-To-Kill-Rouge-95991506

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  • spideracer gold member
    November 19
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    Just cutting his dick wasn't enough, you had to set him alight as well. That's awesome girl...yes revenge is truly sweet, is it not? Fantastic imagery with great flow to move your poem along at a nice pace. Rhyming here sounds natural and so makes for a good read. Congratulations on gold and thanks for sharing.


  • Delrondu
    November 8

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    ooh chills. they will really think twice now lol. great job, great flow, i couldn't stop reading even if i wanted to. you got me hooked from the first stanza.

  • Moon Raven
    October 27

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    Wicked.

    Wow. I love this. Revenge is so sweet. Your words flow so well and your wording is marvelous. Very intriguing story. I was hooked from the first line. Great work

    Though I am curious, what has this man done?! Lol none the less, brilliant.


    • Lexie - gold member
      October 27

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      LOL Thank you

      what did he do??
      nothing, i just like to torture men Lmao!
      just kidding


  • i vomit sunshine
    October 26

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    Oh my god

    This has already made the finalists list. =]
    I loved every word, and yes, as morbid as I may seem, i thought of my abusive ex the entire time.
    Very VERY good imagery, and I'm thinking maybe, just maybe, I'm going to give you this address, and, you should give this one certain "man" a visit.
    I loved this entire peice, but my favorite part was: "Do you feel regret with each slice I make?
    Each piece of you I slowly take?
    Amazing what you can live through
    You never believed, but now you do
    The blood is flowing fast and free
    Such delight it is to see
    And you still cry and beg and plead
    You’re simply paying for your deed"

    Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck!

    Much love,
    Abbey.


    • Lexie - gold member
      October 27
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      thank you, i'm truly honored by your comment! think we all have some lucky guy we could act this out on Hahahahaha


  • spiritraven
    August 9

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    Wow

    Revenge is sweet or so they say. Well written piece. Smooth read, very good imagery and I love the ending. Well done, poet.....Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck


  • Antebellum
    August 1

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    wow.
    sounds quote painful lol.

    I had to stop myself from smiling a couple times.
    thanks for taking the time to enter,

    best of luck.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 27

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    I couldn't help but grin as I read this, pure bliss..lol. A fantastic tale of revenge! Superb flow and rhyme to top it off, well done! Thanks for entering and good luck

  • Well, I remember this one. And I must say that I still cringed while I read this. I absolutely loved this one and still do. Bravo!

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 14
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    We're still friends right...
    just checking, I wanna stay on your
    good side
    Your words are scathing
    this is packed a punch
    no-one reading this can
    walk away without feeling
    beaten up
    Great work here
    One of the best i've read
    in awhile...

    Pastel


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 13
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    oh yea,

    I forgot, you had me cringing with this one...painfully cringing.

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 13
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    OH MY



    A very bitter and vengeful piece indeed. Remind me never to piss you off.
    Excellent write though.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    January 13

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    Love it...

    So dark, so painful, so delightfully scorned...
    The bitterness is strong in this one...
    And although the dick is painful, little tip... Work the testicles, a lot more excruciating...
    To slit the sac & show him you holding one before you crush/slice/rip (your choice) will hold a much more delightfully horrified expression, not to mention tears...
    I like you, this justified sadism at its best...
    Needless to say, fantastic write...
    Thanks for the cringe, the imagery & the chuckle...
    Well done!!!

  • mcfreeman
    January 13
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    YOU...SHOULD...

    QUITE SMOKING US


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 13
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    OUCHHHHHH!!!

    DARK AND TWISTED..l.o.l. you're no one to play with i see..


  • Amera gold member
    January 13

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    Ah! “Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn”
    My God! This has to have hurt! Penned all in rhyme you did an amazing job.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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