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Time to kill

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I have a little time to kill

So stay a while if you will

Watch me lure him with desire

My vengeful mind is set on fire

Whilst he’s thinking with his cock

I’ll spike his drink, oh what a shock

He doesn’t quite know left from right

Oh how much fun I’ll have tonight

 

 As I lead him to the bed

His eyes are rolling in his head

This playful puppy is all mine

I tie him down and feel divine

Sweet revenge is mine to take

As gleefully I start to take

My instruments each one with care

Hummm … We’ll have to wax that pubic hair

 

 Swiftly tie a gag in place

Such stupid expression upon his face

A mixture between confusion and panic

But its terror I see when my blades on his dick

Little cuts along the way

“Oh yes that’s right its time to pay”

Not such a big boy now I see

Recognition maybe? Do you remember me?

 

 Do you feel regret with each slice I make?

Each piece of you I slowly take?

Amazing what you can live through

You never believed, but now you do

The blood is flowing fast and free

Such delight it is to see

And you still cry and beg and plead

You’re simply paying for your deed

 

 But alas my work is through

Just one more thing to do for you

Those are nasty wounds

Infection could set in

I’ll wash you off with this bottle of gin

Grab my bag, my coat, my work is done

Take a cigarette and offer you one

Light up as I take the door off the latch

 

                Watch your expression change

 

                                                               As I throw you the match…. 

Author notes

An old one that i kinda like

art by: http://luncatic.deviantart.com/art/A-Time-To-Kill-Rouge-95991506

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 27

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    I couldn't help but grin as I read this, pure bliss..lol. A fantastic tale of revenge! Superb flow and rhyme to top it off, well done! Thanks for entering and good luck
  • Well, I remember this one. And I must say that I still cringed while I read this. I absolutely loved this one and still do. Bravo!

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**

  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 14
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    We're still friends right...
    just checking, I wanna stay on your
    good side
    Your words are scathing
    this is packed a punch
    no-one reading this can
    walk away without feeling
    beaten up
    Great work here
    One of the best i've read
    in awhile...

    Pastel


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 13
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    oh yea,

    I forgot, you had me cringing with this one...painfully cringing.

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 13
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    OH MY



    A very bitter and vengeful piece indeed. Remind me never to piss you off.
    Excellent write though.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Fritz O skennick silver member
    January 13

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    Love it...

    So dark, so painful, so delightfully scorned...
    The bitterness is strong in this one...
    And although the dick is painful, little tip... Work the testicles, a lot more excruciating...
    To slit the sac & show him you holding one before you crush/slice/rip (your choice) will hold a much more delightfully horrified expression, not to mention tears...
    I like you, this justified sadism at its best...
    Needless to say, fantastic write...
    Thanks for the cringe, the imagery & the chuckle...
    Well done!!!

  • mcfreeman
    January 13
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    YOU...SHOULD...

    QUITE SMOKING US


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 13
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    OUCHHHHHH!!!

    DARK AND TWISTED..l.o.l. you're no one to play with i see..


  • Amera gold member
    January 13

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    Ah! “Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn”
    My God! This has to have hurt! Penned all in rhyme you did an amazing job.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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