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Circus freak

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I can’t tell if you’re laughing

but that smile says all I need,

 

 

I’m begging for the end

you insist and just proceed,

 

 

Take every ounce of dignity

with those rebuking words,

 

 

Add fire to the fuel

because you know how much it hurts,

 

 

Your empathy is choking me

your sympathy is poison ,

 

 

You offer satisfaction

but with toxic solution,

 

 

A sugar coated time bomb

and the fuse is running down,

 

 

You’ve made my life a circus

and i'm the fucking clown

  

Author notes

Dont be fooled by green grass

art by: http://ormhuz.deviantart.com/art/The-Mind-Freak-Circus-78308661

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  • Galaxy2
    January 16

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    What a poem!
    What a brilliant piece!
    I love it, honey...and I love you....
    Kisses all over!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 14

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    wow

    extremely powerful words my friend and the pain is apparently very deep..i'm sorry for your pain my friend..


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    January 13

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    Whoa... Love this...

    Such a compelling, strong & visual narrative that captivated me throughout...
    And gotta say, love the pic too...
    Another fantastic write...
    Well done!!!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 13

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    A sugar coated time bomb

    and the fuse is running down,


    I feel drawn to these lines here. They are my favorite and i think you really did well with this.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**