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Havoc in you.

Intoxicated by your eyes.
That seem to be hated,
by the heart that lays inside.
By the mind showing me,
its own designe.
And loved,
by the fault that was mine.
I fall for you, again and again.
Your my hilucination.
Your eyes are my hunger.
As your smile is my thirst.
And your heart is my craving.
But it hurts.
My smile seems to falter,
of its own accord.
And my eyes, so deep before.
Are tired and worn.
Playing havoc with my heart,
as the chaos falls apart.

tell the truth....

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  • Shredded Paper
    November 19
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    I like this one a lot... good job emm keep it up i like your poetry........ so no more throwing them away.