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Mesmerized

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relaxing on a bed of fallen leaves

that feels so crunchy and dry

mesmerized

by the changing canvas above

as the luminous clouds go floating by

 

 

Author notes

26 words "Fallen From Grace" -- by mY.lifE.iN.lyricS
~ http://www.flickr.com/photos/rachaelsphotos/3003113011/ ~

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Wonderful idea and imagery combined. How relaxing a piece -- imagining just lying there and watching the sky change in between the tree tops. Truly an amazing poem.

    Thank you for this


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 16

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    Ah..the nature is depicted with a beauty and within the beautiful words as well..love the scenario you created my friend..well done..


  • Dragotha
    January 13

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    Awesome

    I loved this poem it put me right in the season of fall, the smell of the leaves the nittersweet air, plus the picture and page are amazing.