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Holes in my paper.

You cut holes in my paper.
You cut holes in my heart.
My soul is shredded,
as I fall apart.
I write myslef in pen.
Try to glue myself again.
My needles are broken,
and I've run out of thread.
I cant sew myself together.
I'm already half dead.
Crawling to a coffin,
since who knows when.
I close the blinds,
and shut the doors,
but the light finds its way in.
Healing me in dripping warmth,
but only on the surface.
You are not satisfied.
Brake me again.
Cut holes in my paper.
Cut holes in my heart.
I dare you.

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I dont think its very good, but I felt like writing...

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Comments

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  • kamranAslam
    June 23
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    Em u r a great poet.that was realy nice. i love it


    • Frikyeah
      June 23
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      aw thanks kami!!! I like yours too!
      thanks so much!!! ttyl.
      -Emm


  • CJblackmagic
    March 13

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    wow thats really intense
    i nearly started crying
    i deff got shivers down my spine
    ur an awsme peot u kn


    • Frikyeah
      March 13
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      thanks! sorry you almost cried! but thankyou for the comment!
      gives me shiver too.
      -Emm


  • hushme2sleep
    March 1
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    wow I think this is amazing! I love the ending!!

    • Frikyeah
      June 17
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      thanks!!! Haha, I try. lol. you need to write more girlie..even though I know you dont write very much hahaha. <3 miss you!!

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